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Fire and Flight remastered; p13
by Woodbee
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Hm. Changed Cutter's mouth in the last panel, because the hooting mouth shape wasn't working for me. Also, the fire is already being lit.
Posted August 16, 2025, 03:27:48 PM
Cutter, Skywise, bear shaman, humans, Wolfriders
Posted August 16, 2025, 03:27:48 PM
Cutter, Skywise, bear shaman, humans, Wolfriders
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Marl
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Comment #1 - Posted August 17, 2025, 11:55:33 AM
This part always breaks my heart.
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Woodbee
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Comment #2 - Posted August 17, 2025, 04:38:53 PM
Yeah. Fire is a natural part of some forest ecosystems, but clearly not this one! And definitely not in the middle of a drought summer! All those huge ancient trees... :<
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Treefox
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Comment #3 - Posted August 18, 2025, 12:52:38 AM
Yeah, it's devastating that that ancient forest was destroyed... there are so many terrible woodfires in Europe at the moment... Always makes me think back to Fire and Flight. So sad.
I love the color transition going on on thise page! Wow! Starting with the cool and soothing blue and getting more and more red and aggressive as the panels progress. The beams of moonlight falling on the wolves are also a lovely touch. And I absolutely love how you changed Cutter's mouth! Looks much better imho. |
Treefox
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Comment #4 - Posted August 18, 2025, 10:45:56 AM
There's just one tiny thing that bugs me here and it has nothing to do with the art. Nightrunner's ears are pricked up, wolves' ears are always laid back when they howl.
It's nothing really, I just thought that something looked off about Nightrunner and I couldn't put my finger on it. |
Woodbee
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Comment #5 - Posted August 18, 2025, 02:25:26 PM
OH! Good catch! That's something I can change, and I think it will improve the flow of the panel, even.
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Amberfox
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Comment #6 - Posted August 20, 2025, 10:23:37 AM
I like the shaman's declarations here as well as Cutter's response. I think you altered that a bit and it works well. I agree about the howling and ears laid back, but it is a nitpick. I'm enjoying these, and it's making me NEED to reread my books.
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