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Fire and Flight remastered; p12
by Woodbee
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Two major changes - I switched the focus to just Cutter's eyes in the fourth panel, instead of his whole head and the back of Nightrunner's, so that I could put the 'wolf-send' as an image in between the third and fourth panel. Then I added the women and children to the big summoning panel. I had the whole bottom panel in full color, but decided that blanking out the people who were not summoned/just caught the edges of the summons made it easier to understand.
Posted August 16, 2025, 03:18:28 PM
Nightrunner, Cutter, Skywise, Wolfrider tribe
Posted August 16, 2025, 03:18:28 PM
Nightrunner, Cutter, Skywise, Wolfrider tribe
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nilla
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Comment #1 - Posted August 16, 2025, 03:51:07 PM
Ohh wow! The changes you made are phenomenal! The hammers home the fear and worry they feel, what's at stake. This is the most playful I remember seeing Moonshade. Woodlock's expression is especially compelling.
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Marl
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Comment #2 - Posted August 17, 2025, 11:55:11 AM
I absolutely agree with Nilla! I love the changes, especially in the last panel.
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Treefox
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Comment #3 - Posted August 18, 2025, 12:49:40 AM
Oh I absolutely love that wolf-send!! Just sending an image is what I always imagined it would be like. Just wow. I love the close up of Cutter's eyes and the horror in them. I just miss them being more slanted as in the original. They look quite realistic here, which is amazing art wise! Adding the women and children is a wonderful touch. I thought Moonshade looked like Bownberry for a second. Something of the way you drew the newly added tribe members reminds of Bakshi designs (which is very close to Wendy's original elf design. And we know she worked with him for a little bit).
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Afke
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Comment #4 - Posted August 18, 2025, 06:43:41 AM
Yes, I think the last panel where you added the rest of the tribe is your best addition yet!
The wolfsending seems also more likely; just feelings and images. |
Amberfox
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Comment #5 - Posted August 20, 2025, 10:29:36 AM
Include me in on the love of the last panel! The two that really stick out for me is Clearbrook, just so incredibly gorgeous in her concern, and how Strongbow is cradling young Dart. Wow! I also love the inclusion of the others since it has more of a Holt feel. Can't really express it. The original seemed to leave the rest out, but your rework shows the unity of the tribe and the emotions of all. I really love it.
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