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Comic - High-Attitude Flight (page 5)
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silentleaf
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Comment #1 - Posted August 15, 2014, 04:03:52 PM
I love all of your pages. they are so clean and crisp! keep it up!
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Eregyrn
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Comment #2 - Posted August 22, 2014, 08:40:32 AM
Yay! More pages of this story! I like how the twirling broken leaf provides a small sense of movement and continuity to what might otherwise be a sort of static, talky page.
Although, a slight criticism: believe me, I totally get the decision to maintain character continuity by taking details of the upper drawing, and then blowing them up for the later panels -- the middle one of Hawk's eyes, and the lower one of Foxtrail's face. I have totally used that technique myself.  But… if Hawk's eyes *aren't* actually just a blow-up (and of course I can see the subtle differences in other aspects of his face, like the position of the brows and his hair), for me, the lack of crisp-ness in the inking on his eyes makes it feel that way. And on Foxtrail in the lower panel, I probably would have suggested changing some aspect of his expression just slightly, so it wasn't a direct copy. (Maybe a quirk of a brow or twitch of the mouth.) Because the sameness feels a little too static, to me.A very minor point, though. |
Dreamcat
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Comment #3 - Posted August 22, 2014, 04:15:28 PM
You´re totally right about the copies, Eregyrn, but I was a lazybone that day and so I excused my cheating by telling myself that it´s okay on this page, since it´s meant to be a general calm-down after all this action and excitement of the previous pages. >__>
The leaf, btw, is meant to catch that much attention. You´ll see later on why that is. 
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