ElfQuest Fan Art

Great interplay here, for a page that's dialogue-heavy.  Fantastic job with the changing expressions, and allowing small moments to come through (like that "gulp"). You strike a really great balance between "expressive" and "cartoony", allowing it to be the latter when it pays off the most, like in the last panel -- and again, great choice to allow popping out of the frame to add to the energy of the scene.

My only criticism here is that the words are difficult to read on the page at the resolution at which the entire page can be seen.  You have to click through to the highest resolution to be able to read it comfortably… but at that size, we're really only seeing part of the page.

I sympathize with this challenge.  It's really hard, when working digitally, to decide "what is the optimal size for people viewing each page" and "what size font can I use so that it's comfortable to read, but not so big that I can't fit what I need to on the page".  In most of these panels, it kind of looks like you could afford to use a larger font and still fit within the bubbles.  But I can see that it could cause issues in the first, dialogue-heavy panel.  Again -- sympathies!  I've run into that problem myself.