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Crescent Pinup Sketch

by Fawn Silverstream

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A pinup in Calendar-style of Crescent, daughter of Strongbow and Moonshade ^^

The portrait looks odd to me; anyone has any tips?

Posted February 24, 2012, 01:10:36 PM
February 24, 2012, 02:32:51 PM
Crescent Pinup


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Treefox

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Comment #1 - Posted February 25, 2012, 04:38:00 AM
Lovely, lovely, lovely! Nice outfit, too!
There is something nostalgic about that picture, maybe because of the sepia linework, which looks wonderful, btw.
I think the eyes on the portrait are slightly too close together. Maybe the strand of hair is strengthening that effect, too.

Mirror

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Comment #2 - Posted February 25, 2012, 03:57:18 PM
Beautiful! So elegant - and very nice outfit!

Perhaps the angle of her forhead is somewhat off; it might be a bit too slanted. But I definitely wouldn't define her portrait as "odd" :D

Looking foreward to seeing more!

Fawn Silverstream

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Comment #3 - Posted February 26, 2012, 01:01:14 AM
@ Treefox: Thank you! And I think that's because of the lock of hair, yeah... I'll see if I can adjust that ^^

@ Mirror: I'm happy you think so! The outfit took me a while to come up with ;). I see what you mean about the forehead, thanks ^^

Berit

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Comment #4 - Posted February 26, 2012, 03:44:35 AM
I gotta say that I like the poses quite a bit! the positions oh the legs are wonderful, and the details on the clothes are nice! and about the portrait, I'd say that Treefox is right, the lock of hair is the only thing that makes it look a bit odd.. for example, if you move the lock a bit so that it covers one of her eyes a bit, it really does't look off then! but that's just my opinion...
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