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Ember and Choplicker
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First time uploading here, just got an account. Here's a drawing I did for my uncle (RIP) showing (spoiler) the mourning of choplicker. Some things still bug me on this but I just want to see what others think.
Made with pen, colored on GIMP.
Posted December 31, 2011, 05:24:15 AM
Ember chop licker howling rock
Made with pen, colored on GIMP.
Posted December 31, 2011, 05:24:15 AM
Ember chop licker howling rock
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Treefox
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Comment #1 - Posted December 31, 2011, 05:38:09 AM
Welcome, welcome! First: a beautiful idea! Poor Firehair, loosing her first Wolffriend...
Lovely colors! You do well with Gimp! Embers colors are spot-on. Do you want critique for this? |
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Comment #2 - Posted December 31, 2011, 02:37:14 PM
Yes, critique will be good, though be gentle with ember, I know what I did wrong (this drawing is a month old), her proportions are kinda off. But this is the first time I drew a wolf so it'd be nice to get some feedback to improve with that. Also: I can't draw moons.
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Windrider
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Comment #3 - Posted December 31, 2011, 09:49:14 PM
Aw, you did very good for your first time drawing a wolf! My only critique there would be that the muzzle should be just a tad longer for a wolf. Dogs generally have shorter muzzles than wolves and the short muzzle on Choplicker here makes him look vaguely husky-like. Otherwise, very nice!
Ember is also very well drawn. The only improvement would be to give her a little longer legs and arms. The proportions you have are very good for a younger, pre-teen Ember but an adult elf would still have a big head compared with the torso (like you've drawn), but would have grown some legs by then! LOL A good guide is that the crotch should be a little lower than center when judging the height of the short elves (on a human it would be on center). |
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Comment #4 - Posted December 31, 2011, 11:13:03 PM
Thank you for the critique, and I agree with you on a lot of it. This was a younger version of her (well, it seemed to be younger) and this is actually my first full body shot, so thank you! I will look forward to doing this again but with much improvement! (Since this picture was drawn, I've gotten several different Proportion guides and pose models, quite useful!)
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