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C/C Moon Princess Crescent

by mischievous_valkyrie

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X3 so here is Crescent again full body this time in the sun village-esque  dress, I would like a Level 2 C/C let me know what I could improve please :)

EDIT: I did alittle adjust to her eyes though I'm not sure I I've got it quite right yet They might still need a little more work, Thankyou for pointing it out Foxeye *hugs*

Ooh and I forgot to mention about Coloring again *sigh* If you feel inclined to color this please just let me know so that I can admire it when its done :)



Posted May 05, 2009, 08:17:33 AM
May 08, 2009, 12:34:24 PM
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OC Savelle Yereh for Foxeye C/C Moon Princess Cr… Crescent Sun village… Nameless number 2
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Foxeye

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Comment #1 - Posted May 05, 2009, 09:29:44 AM
Ahhh! Even more amazing than the first one. She has great knees. ^_^  I like that you made the skirt short. I had assumed for some reason it was longer, but I think it is better this way.

(*snatches up picture and scurries away to color it*)

Edit: BTW, the head size is spot on this time. ^_^  
Last Edited: May 05, 2009, 09:31:25 AM

Icemoon

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Comment #2 - Posted May 05, 2009, 11:00:19 AM
her beauty hurts my eyes !!!!!!!
she's tioo splendid !

Eregyrn

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Comment #3 - Posted May 05, 2009, 12:32:23 PM
Yes, excellent proportions!  You should definitely do more full-figure pieces! :)

Afke

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Comment #4 - Posted May 06, 2009, 12:25:49 AM
She looks so lovely! I like the pose. :)
Although her legs seem to short for the body, or the body too long for the legs. But I'm not too good with elf proportions. I also think her upper legs are scarily thin, but that might be personal preference, 'cause I know we've seen such legs on Dewshine before.

Treefox

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Comment #5 - Posted May 07, 2009, 07:20:48 AM
This is just sooo splendid! I'm love with the outfit. Though I must admit that it rather looks like a gorgeous fantasy/art nouveau dress than a typical sun villager dress. But for me that is fine as I absolutely love your style!

Foxeye

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Comment #6 - Posted May 08, 2009, 11:46:04 AM
Sorry it took me a bit of time to have any c/c, but it wasn't evident to me until I started coloring!

Seems to me that the eyes aren't quite agreeing with each other.  Either the one on the left should slant up a little, or the one on the right should come down:


Which way you go is personal preference, of course, though I like the first one...something a bit more fey about it. :)
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