Image
WIP 1 - Into the Woods (c/c 3)
by Foxeye
Click the picture to view full size.
The crescent shrine is in dire need of a rewrite (it's very clunky to update), so I figured I'd rework the look of it as well. This is my rough sketch/concept of the site art (top left corner).
Before I take this to the next step, I'd love any c/c on anatomy/composition/etc.
I know it's hard to c/c something so rough, but I figured it wouldn't hurt to toss it out there.
Posted April 29, 2009, 11:50:48 PM
crescent
Before I take this to the next step, I'd love any c/c on anatomy/composition/etc.
I know it's hard to c/c something so rough, but I figured it wouldn't hurt to toss it out there.Posted April 29, 2009, 11:50:48 PM
crescent
BBC embed code
|
HTML embed code
|
Direct link
|
| « | » | |||||
| Yereh in hood | WIP 2 - Into the Woo… | WIP 1 - Into the Woo… | Yereh (inks) |
| Comments |
Pages: [1]
mischievous_valkyrie
|
Comment #1 - Posted April 30, 2009, 06:40:59 AM
Woohoo, this is looks really great! Looking forward to the finished version.
On thing the position of the spear bothers me, The Angle doesn't look quite right to me, like it shouldn't be pointed down quite that much... am I making sense? ^^; Now I wish I could do draw overs to show you what I mean X3 but other than that the anatomy looks great and I can't wait to see it finished |
Peacepine
|
Comment #2 - Posted April 30, 2009, 07:43:38 AM
Looks great! I love the style. I can't wait to see the next step!
|
Afke
|
Comment #3 - Posted April 30, 2009, 12:34:04 PM
I don't think the spear is wrong, it's loosely resting in her hand like that.
I myself have troubles picturing this as a web lay-out when it's portrait sized - or do I get the wrong impression from your description? Anatomy looks good, but for composition I need the rest of the screen filling I guess. ;] Anyway, I love the dark concept, I think it'll work great, also concidering Crescent's story. Could you perhaps also show us your plans for the colors? And might be interesting to see a hint of what is beyond those trees, what she might be moving towards - some sun/moon light, an open spot in the woods? Not too much extra detail I guess, main focus should be the character of course, but I mean it mostly contrast-wise. |
|
Last Edited: April 30, 2009, 12:36:18 PM
|
Foxeye
|
Comment #4 - Posted April 30, 2009, 12:55:10 PM
Quote might be interesting to see a hint of...what she might be moving towards - some sun/moon light, an open spot in the woods It's going to be The Stream, with a crescent moon reflecting in the surface. You can somewhat see the light s-shape in the concept, but I may make larger...not quite sure yet. I have a tendency to let things change as I progress. Thank you for the input so far! I'll post it again as things get a little more developed. |
Treefox
|
Comment #6 - Posted May 07, 2009, 07:26:42 AM
*stares* Love! The boldness of the strokes, concept! Gah! Brilliant!
If anything than I would say her arm is too straight. Eh, difficult to describe what I mean. Maybe the line defining the right side of the arm should be a bit rounder where her forearm starts. It's really hard to convey what I mean.. |
Berit
|
Comment #7 - Posted July 10, 2009, 01:48:51 PM
this looks great like this also!... I think the grey tones give it the feeling of fading memories... absolutly wonderful!...
|
Pages: [1]