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Transformation by Wildfire
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Posted November 25, 2012, 11:36:58 AM
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Treefox
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Comment #1 - Posted January 01, 2013, 03:06:51 AM
Oooh, nice one! The colors and contrast are just amazing! Both Voll and Winnowill really reflect their inner change and darkness so well.
Kudos, Wildfire! |
Yavia
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Comment #2 - Posted January 01, 2013, 09:03:37 AM
What a nice theme. I never thought about what happend after Winnowill changed Tyldak into his flyingform. That it could be the beginning of the separation of the two is a good thinking. I love this.
I like the two color Image. |
Midnight
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Comment #3 - Posted January 02, 2013, 08:12:11 AM
Nice setting. There's a whole novel left untold between Winnowill and Lord Voll, I imagine....
I like the subdued coloring you chose. It really sets the mood. |
Maggie
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Comment #4 - Posted January 12, 2013, 09:43:26 AM
I really like the idea behind this entry however I don't think that any of the text was needed to convey what was going on in the picture.
I feel like the artwork and concept were more than strong enough to stand without the clutter of words. |
Startear
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Comment #5 - Posted January 12, 2013, 04:19:54 PM
I love how... old you made Voll look. Old, and tired. The coloring reflect it so wonderfully. Also, very nice to see something between these three. As Midnight said, there is a novel of unsaid things between Voll and Winnowill.
As for the text, I feel that the words in the last panel were the ones unnecessary. The top ones, sure, they could have been without on their own. But they fit so well with Voll, and well, having one talk while the other doesn't respond just seems odd. XD Without the bottom one though, the scene would be moodier and more glum. |
Unsettling Darkness
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Comment #6 - Posted January 14, 2013, 10:27:37 AM
I really like this. It almost seems to be carved into wood. A really interesting mood prevails in this. I don't know if you did it on purpose, but i think it's clever, that the characters are gray-ish and the outside world is colourful.
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Windrider
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Comment #7 - Posted January 27, 2013, 11:12:56 AM
This is a well thought out idea and it looks like you really spent some time figuring out how to lay out the panels to get the visuals of the story to flow. That part of this piece is quite excellent. Bravo! My only criticism on that part is the shading is pretty murky, even for grim Blue Mountain. Some of the panels get a bit lost, and the idea is so good that I want to see it all better!
Unlike Maggie, I am not bothered by the amount of text or what it says, like other commentators I think this is an interesting interpretation of the history of these two characters. But it is true that the text doesn't flow as well as the visuals. I am finding, as I create my own comic pages, that getting speech bubbles to work and flow is much more difficult than expected. They really need to be on a separate layer so they can be moved around until they work. I also think that you have a theme of round shapes in the art that the sharp edged speech bubbles create major discord with that. But I really like this piece and it was another "runner up" for me. |
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