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If I were a less sickly artist, or at least a better artist, I'd redo this glorified thumbnail and make it pretty like I do for Heavenly Bride.
BUT I'm not. So I won't.
Posted March 13, 2011, 08:38:22 PM
BUT I'm not. So I won't.
Posted March 13, 2011, 08:38:22 PM
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Razzle
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Comment #1 - Posted March 17, 2011, 09:46:37 AM
"Glorified thumbnail"!? You don't give yourself enough credit.
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spearcarrier
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Comment #2 - Posted March 17, 2011, 03:51:19 PM
=^-^= I'm just not happy with it. I had a high fever that day, though.
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Amberfox
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Comment #3 - Posted March 19, 2011, 03:05:48 AM
I agree you're too hard on yourself. I think this page is fine, although to clean it up, I would only suggest two things: Aroree's profile is a bit off. I think her eye should be lowered a bit to match up where you've defined the "dip" in before the start of the nose This makes the lower half of her face seem too short. Not badly so, it's not distracting from the overall image, and probably better than I can do with profiles. The second would be the two bottom images framing Winnowill's butt. Something just seems missing from them to indicate what's going on. I assume it's Tyldak, but without any reference to anything else, it's a little vague. Winnowill's final comment on this page has a wonderful touch of ominousness; I can just imagine her purring as she says it. Your comic seems to give a little hint as to what and when she started down her "dark" path.
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spearcarrier
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Comment #4 - Posted March 20, 2011, 12:20:32 AM
Yeah, Aroree's profile was an argh to me.... but the final panel was the major argh. It was like I didn't know what to do with myself. If I were to redraw the art for this - and I probably never will have the time - this would be one of the first pages that would get overhauled. Maybe I'd pick an aerial view for the final panel.
I am happy to know I got the story clues and cues right enough for people to get them. I'd actually spent a LOT of time reading and rereading Winnie's story for this... and asking Mr. Pini a lot of questions. So my thought and research has paid off, and that makes me happy. |
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