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Rill
by Wildfire
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Rill for Emberra. Sorry it took so long 
Posted December 27, 2011, 04:53:35 AM
rill, emberra, river twine holt
Posted December 27, 2011, 04:53:35 AM
rill, emberra, river twine holt
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Treefox
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Comment #1 - Posted December 29, 2011, 01:04:45 AM
His face AND expression is wonderful and spot-on! I also like how you draw elf ears.
But as you're asking for C/C: I think even for elven kids proportions his head is a tiny bit big and also his arms seem too short. They should already reach down to roughly the middle of his thigh. And the hands seems slightly awkward. But hey, I hardly know anyone who likes to draw hands... I am no good with them anyway. Overall, I think this portrays perfectly what you wanted to get across: the frustration and slight shame of failing to catch the prey and even getting hurt. Did you color this traditionally? |
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